Whats going on
This has a good, basic, beat going and you gradually introduce little f/x and the bass flicks and then... what the hell? You just quit or something? It sounded like you were gonna take it someplace and then decided to answer the phone (it was grandma, long distance) and forgot to come back.
And I kinda like the lyrics, I've worked in a number of warehouse jobs, maybe high, never on acid. You should try throwing your words into your song just to see what they sound like.